Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 19


Welcome to my nineteenth Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet Sunday post! If you missed any of the previous posts or need a refresher on the entire story, you can catch up on my Meanmna ~ #8Sunday page.

What you missed: Sarette went through one possible scenario where in the end she made her mother cry and then…



“Crap,” I said as I dropped my head on the steering wheel, accidentally hitting the loud-obnoxious car horn, and then sat back and covered my mouth with my hands—like that helped.

Mom looked at me through the blinds and waved.

Smile, Sarette; you can do this, I thought then took a deep, steadying breath, got out of the car, and started walking slowly toward the house.

Thinking, Maybe if I walk slowly enough, she’ll go to bed before I get there, but rolled my eyes at my ridiculousness.

When I reached the door I found a note taped to it with my name written in beautiful swirly calligraphy; there were only two words on the inside: Good luck!

Quickly looking around I could see someone about four houses down; it was Elwin.

His outline started to blur, and I heard in my mind, I can listen if you want me to; I might be able to help with the conversation.

No, thank you, I answered back then I gasped when I realized I was communicating with him telepathically.

See, you’re learning already,  then he disappeared.

I was smiling when I walked into the house.


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Check back in next week for Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 20 of Meanmna: Book One of the Daearen Realms!

But, if you can’t wait for next week…


Seventeen-year-old Sarette has always thought of her life as average, even a bit boring. She does well in school, has a loving mother and a loyal best friend, Mathew. Of course, she has her problems as well—cold Michigan winters, a long-lost father she knows nothing about, and the lack of a boyfriend. She also has the vague sensation that she is being watched by some unseen entity, but figures that means she’s average and crazy.

Nothing could be further from the truth . . .

Daearen isn’t much different than the human world.

Imagine a world where science is replaced with magic.




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Have an awesome weekend everybody!

~ Emmy


15 Comments on “Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 19

  1. I love the little touches of stupid things people do — like covering her mouth with her hands. And walking slowly hoping her mother would go to bed before she got there. LOL

  2. It’s good that he wanted to help but I guess she is going to need to focus on the conversation ahead instead of the voices in her head.

  3. I love the little tidbits of her thoughts and actions as P.T. mentioned too! Telepathic speech is fun to play around with in stories like this. I really do need to buy and read this one. Can’t wait to find out how this meeting goes with her mother, and I’m thinking she might end up wishing she had Erwin listen in.

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