Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 11

Welcome to my eleventh Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet Sunday post! If you missed any of the previous posts, you can catch up on my Meanmna ~ #8Sunday page.


What you missed: Nothing! Sarette just left the store completely freaked out.



“I can’t wait to see you again!” shouted Paige.
I smiled and waved to her, then I turned around and started walking.
I’d love to see you again too, little girl, but it will be at least seventy-two hours before I get out of the nuthouse.
“No!” I heard the voice again—this time out loud and coming from behind me.
I sprinted toward my car.
Hitting the unlock button on the keyfob over and over, just to make sure the door would not be locked when I got there.
I was panting as I jerked the door open and got in as fast as I could.
After a moment, I looked in the rear view mirror.
Someone was sitting in my backseat staring at me.
I think I screamed before I fainted.


Uh oh…
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Check back in next week for Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 12 of Meanmna: Book One of the Daearen Realms!

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Seventeen-year-old Sarette has always thought of her life as average, even a bit boring. She does well in school, has a loving mother and a loyal best friend, Mathew. Of course, she has her problems as well—cold Michigan winters, a long-lost father she knows nothing about, and the lack of a boyfriend. She also has the vague sensation that she is being watched by some unseen entity, but figures that means she’s average and crazy.

Nothing could be further from the truth . . .

Daearen isn’t much different than the human world.

Imagine a world where science is replaced with magic.



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13 Comments on “Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Snippet 11

  1. Yup, I enjoyed this when I read the sample as well…great stuff. And hopefully I’ll get some time this weekend to finish up the current story on my Kindle (at around 50%), as yours is next on my list.

  2. Uh oh, indeed!

    Now she is locked, unconscious, in the car with the voice in her head?

    Loving it!

  3. Ooops. She’s in trouble. Let’s hope she comes round soon and can confront whatever is locked in the car with her. Good snippet – I’m looking forward to more of this.

  4. The last line made me giggle.

    I have this on my Kindle but probably won’t get to read it until May unless I get way ahead on word count for Camp NaNoWriMo.

  5. That last line was sure a kick in the rear seat. I was right with her on repeatedly clicking the remote, just in case.

  6. I would scream too if I saw someone in my backseat! Not a pleasant surprise! I wonder what the voice is really saying “no” to though. Is it able to hear her thoughts and that’s what it keeps telling her no about? So curious!

    Great snippet!

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